October 24- Post #2
16 years ago
Friday, October 10, 2008
What I wuld Change
if I culd change one thing in the book (maximum ride) it wuld be that the group of kids wuld not split up. The group wuld be wuld be and is stronger wen they are together. It was stupid the way they split. One member didnt like the new guy so he left with a couple others. Instead of letting them ( Fang, Gazzy and Iggy) go the others go they (Max, Nudge, Angel, Ari and Total) shulda went after them. It would make the book better cause then the book wuld be shorter. (itz to long)
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It is what the school says "safty in numbers then why not listen"?
you would only change that so the book would be shorter? i would too
yeah cuz i got wat you meant bout sticken together kno wat im sayin but yeah good post.
whatever jared. changing a book to be shorter is lame, if you don't like the length or how the author is writing, just don't read it.
Is it too long, and therefore doesn't keep your attention, or is is too long and you just don't want to spend the time reading it? I think there is a difference there.
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